the only gud story i rea in my life (till now) by the way main kahan compare karu aapne ko.... tunmne bola tha ki thoda bohot kar sakte ho... narration bohot acha tha bhai.... starting was really gud... but somethin was missing i dont know what was tha.... par something... agar vo something hota toh it will be superb.... by the way mere level ki baat nahi hai story writing or main jyada janta bhi nahi hun.... par still it is really grt... yar ... i would thn god ki tum jaisa dost mila... talented....
the only gud story i rea in my life (till now)
ReplyDeleteby the way main kahan compare karu aapne ko....
tunmne bola tha ki thoda bohot kar sakte ho...
narration bohot acha tha bhai....
starting was really gud...
but somethin was missing i dont know what was tha....
par something... agar vo something hota toh it will be superb....
by the way mere level ki baat nahi hai story writing or main jyada janta bhi nahi hun....
par still it is really grt... yar ...
i would thn god ki tum jaisa dost mila...
talented....
really awesome..
ReplyDeletehey the story was fantastic..the dialogues and the emotions were propotional to eachother ...write some suspense story the next time ,,,
ReplyDeleteVery cool story.Write some more stories.I wanna looking for ur posts.
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